Below are some images of feedback I have recieved.
This is some feedback I recieved about my most recent draft of my double page spread. This shows that up to this point, I have quite a low grade so I will take all of the comments on board and make sure that I make enough changes to build up my grade. She has said that I need to left align the columns and the kicker in my texts. It would be better if I was a little more brief in the image captions, so that I don't give too much information away about the narrative. The rest of the comments are based on alignment and sizing of different parts of the article. I'll be sure to make all of these changes in order for it to look more realistic and professional.
This was a feedback sheet that I was given about my short film. I am to review the use of hand held camera shots and pans as at some points they appear to be a little bit shaky. The scene where the characters are outdoors is too dark so I may need to refilm. However, given certain circumstances with my actors, I am not able to refilm so I will have to use some editing tools on the software in order to brighten up the colour and lighting as best I can. It was also commented that the opening scene could benefit from being a little bit shorter as it appears to go on for a very long time. Again, I will make sure I take these comments on board and make necessary changes.
After the above feedback sheet for my double page spread, I immediately made the changes that were put forward. After I had done so, I emailed my teacher personally and asked if she thought I had improved and advice on what else I could do to make it better. This was really helpful as I am now able to make the three changes she mentioned in the email to make the product as good as I can.
This is another feedback sheet that I recieved, this time about my poster. She said that the quality of the image was very good, as was the integration of text and language. She commented that I have a good understanding of conventions.
There are still areas to improve, however. The changes I need to make are: use a different colour other than green as it is not clear what this colour signifies. So, I would like to include some more colours to create an army/camo effect, especially on the title font. The rest of the comments again are about the alignment and sizing of things and to make necessary adjustments to some positionings of things. She also advised that I include some social media logos to go with the text I have included. I will make sure I consider all of these comments and follow the teachers advice as best I can to make sure my work improves.
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